not shore how to write properly. not really sure how to use periods and commas and such.
Well, I'm sorry if I made you feel at all bad or unwelcome, for sure. That wasn't my intention.Your ideas are clear, and your grammar and sentence structure are actually just fine, very good in fact. Easy to understand, just reads a little slow on my end.
If you have a local library, ask them for a book called, "Eats, Shoots, and Leaves." It's a funny little book you can read in a couple of hours that teaches grammar and punctuation through jokes, by making fun of both the common mistakes people make, and the overly- stuffy, nit-picky rules. Clever and easy to read. They should use it in the schools.
Regardless, you are welcome here, and we'll help any way we can.