Not bad at all. Looks good for a first point, and bet it would puncture a critter. Don't look like any arterial blood, so you done good.
As for criticism and suggestions:
#1: Keep knapping. Pay attention to cause and effect.
#2. Concentrate on making good platforms below the center line of the piece. Grind 'em good.
#3. See #1 .
#4: See #1 .
#5: See #1 .
#6: See #1 .
#7: When pressure flaking, apply more inward than downward pressure. This will make the flakes run farther across the piece. To thin points and get a good cross section, the flakes need to travel at least halfway across the point.
#8: Flakes like to follow ridges.
#9: Never try to run a flake into a concave area. It will step-fracture.
#10: See #1 & # 2.