I think that's a pretty good job for your first...but, cedar may be a little soft wood for a tip overlay.
DBar
My first red oak bow had ERC tips as well, I think it varies in density quite a bit. The stuff I cut hardly dented with my fingernail and didn't take any wear with a poly finish.
Looks good, especially for the length. Did you post this on r/Bowyer a while back?