Carson,
Many thanks for that. I have seen a number of takedowns where the belly and sides (to about half depth) have been shouldered, but did wonder about the longevity given repeated compression against the brass, so will take your advice and taper down to the inner brass sleeve section all round.
Interested that both you and Weylin do not think the knots will be a problem where they are in relation to the edge of the sleeve. I can see that they will be well away from the edge of bow and the back is free of any defects. They are quite solid from what I can see at the moment, but there is no knowing how they develop inside the wood before they are grown over, so is there not a danger that the bow will be weakened in an area of high stress concentration around the sleeve edge?