Martyn,
The outer limbs are too straight, and the inner limbs about need to be bending more as well. Remember you have 63" bow with say an 8" non working handle section so the working limbs are really for a 58" bow. This makes them a little less tolerant to tillering mistakes especially on limbs that are already slender. These limbs need to start bending right out of the fades for a 28" draw and only the last few inches of the tips should be straight.
One trick I like to show new bowyers is, wearing safety glasses, look down the limb from the grip to the tip, with one hand on the grip and the other pushing out on the string where the arrow goes. This way you can really see whether the limb is bending in an arc or has flat spots, and you can flip the bow over and compare to the other limb. This perspective amplifies the flaws and makes them easier to determine where to remove wood next. You don't have to move the limbs much to see where the problems are so the load on the string isn't scary.
Everyone sees things a little differently and I try and show them as many angles of the limbs as possible to help them see what is going on.
After about 50 bows, any flaw in the tiller will stick out like a sore thumb...Yer doing just fine..
Rich